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I was working on some comic styles and I had this colored but it didn't look too good. I still can't ink or draw hands.
So does this look manga or american to you?

EDIT: Fixed? I dunno, I think I'll just jump in on the comic and improve along the way. Thanks for the crits!
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TheDivineMissM-94's avatar

I think it looks like a cross between the two :XD:

Great work on the poses :D

Just a couple things I noticed on the guy sitting down, his arm looks a bit too short, I think his shoulder should be lifted a bit, and his forearm lengthened. You could also arch his back a bit so he follows the direction his hair is being pulled, just to give a bit more emphasis on that. But they're small things, it looks great :)